Mia, I like how you have explained what you did there and who you went with. Another thing I like was how you showed us what you saw and I also liked how you told us what the pattern was called. The last thing I liked was the photos you posted so we knew what the pattern looked like. Hope You Enjoyed The Day! -Daimai/Kenneth
Greeting Mia My name is Avalon and l am from panmure bridge school l like how you went with your family to Divali with your mum and brother in the city and the patten was great to see on your hand it looked cool and l think it looked nice on you l like this blog post because it showed that you went to the Divali with your mum and brother. Great job
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Great work Mia! Keep up the great blog writing :)
Mia,
I like how you have explained what you did there and who you went with. Another thing I like was how you showed us what you saw and I also liked how you told us what the pattern was called. The last thing I liked was the photos you posted so we knew what the pattern looked like.
Hope You Enjoyed The Day!
-Daimai/Kenneth
Greeting Mia
My name is Avalon and l am from panmure bridge school
l like how you went with your family to Divali with your mum and brother in the city and the patten was great to see on your hand it looked cool and l think it looked nice on you l like this blog post because it showed that you went to the Divali with your mum and brother.
Great job
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